INTRO:
consequences mentioned in intro

criteria needs to evaluate alternatives and not problem

clearly state what we wish to improve

ALTERNATIVES:

listed

clearly state each alternative

The main goal of project mentioned in intro or as one alternative?

• question for Jared

Jared is a reviewer not our audience

background on topic and no the assignment

rather than saying primary and secondary state as common topics

EX: categories such as technical feasibility, student complaints

clearly state why we are reviewing other universities

compare other universities in one paragraph in the results section

mention news articles, social media, article regarding registration

• cite and use

Mention how we are going to fix it properly

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