phase one:

Reading Task 1:

1.

• hard to tell format
• grammar mistakes  and spelling
•  accurate grade average
• check formatting issue in the book
• look into revising awkward sentences.

2. 

• answer why you want to work for them
• you named your qualities linked to your position 

3.

• be more specific in naming the job and how you found out about them
• the evidence is there but not convincing

Reading Task 2:

1.

• proof read
• organize your format ( intro , education then work paragraph)

Phase Two

Reading task 1:

1

• don't need a summary paragraph
• make it easy to understand 
• headings are easily understood
• balance more towards experience 
• make sure you specify the position 

Reading task 2:

1-4

• list relevant course taken in college
• good amount of experience 
• needs to mention what you learned and what responsibilities he was given that may be unique

Reading task 3:

1.

• start with most relevant previous job
• make sure your dates are in chronological order when organizing your resume
• change basic verbs to action verbs